Pasquale: Furthermore, Roche points out that the areas of the brain where the activity takes place were never even properly charted, let alone decoded.
I'd get rid of 'even'
Pasquale: There are ways to do this by extended meditation, but this can take years. We have more efficient method nowadays.
'We have more efficient methods nowadays.'
Pasquale: Quinton is well versed in Metathermics, which is the area of psionic development that deals with instigating rapid temperature changes and chemical reactions. He used to be one of Biotech researchers working on new applications of psionics.
'He used to be one of 'the' Biotech researchers'