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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #270 on: September 22, 2019, 09:51:29 am »
When you get to the military base with Dude you get the option of saying "The things i hear from you have stopped sounding strange a long ago" instead of like a long time ago or long ago.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #271 on: September 22, 2019, 02:26:12 pm »
Minor mistake for Vlatko's dialogue in his minor in Core City:

I... I raised those kids. I still see them as that - kids. Now, they don't need me, me and my wife, as much anymore. Expect when they need money. ::He laughs.:: Although, Maxim earns his own money, but since he works for me, so, again, I'm the one giving him the coin.

should be "except" when they need money

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #272 on: September 23, 2019, 03:37:18 am »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #273 on: October 13, 2019, 08:30:07 pm »
*Her

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #274 on: November 16, 2019, 04:32:22 am »
When you join the pirates, if you ask Grim where to start on the ruins, he says the mutie refuge and that it's "east" of the expedition camp; it's west. 

If you talk to Donnie about port crag, at one point he says "Anyways, we use Port Ceto as an extension of Port Ceto". 

Katya, if you ask her about the monolith, starts talking about will.  She says "Only with it will can you..."

Razor, if you ask him who is better with blades between him and D'flinga, at one point he says "Ain' on one slicker than me"

Edgar in camp hathor, if you ask how he became leader, says Gideon the previous leader died while "hunting Crawler." 

Rathound king, if you try to intimidate him when you first talk to him, your line ends with "you got another think coming."


"a truce", or "made peace"

Tanner, after returning from the rail crossing quests, when you tell him you helped rail crossing, he asks why the faceless attacked, the first response option has you telling him what buzzer said about the object the acid hunters have "device currently in hands of"; should be "in the hands of".
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #275 on: November 30, 2019, 04:26:45 am »
Azif, when you first enter oculus
"This is Oculus, the eye of underrail, yes.  All important information find their way here sooner or later."
should be "information finds it's way"

Abrams
"Free drones movement has been around for a long up north"
a long time up north

Abrams, about the faceless
"...perpetuate tell tales"
should be "tall tales" I think

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #276 on: December 05, 2019, 08:06:27 am »
Captain Grimm when you ask him about his creepy statue: "I find that it when I am in certain moods", unnecessary "it"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #277 on: December 08, 2019, 06:31:01 am »
Razor, when he finally tells you what happened to his eye, in the paragraph that starts with "It was immediately obvious that the cap'n was a jettin' swordsman", at some point says "legitimatelly" which should be "legitimately"
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #278 on: December 15, 2019, 06:48:43 pm »
Iris' dialogue should probably be reword to something like:

You thought it (the famine) was due to bad management from the apex technocrats, as well as to other recent environmental and geopolitical changes. Your predictions for the future of Biocorp and Underrail were negative in general, this only further attributing to it.

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« Reply #279 on: December 18, 2019, 05:16:32 pm »
Pirates questline, when you bring Grim the acorn and go see the professor, not long into the conversation Grimm says:
"I admit, I was surprised, if a bit disappointed by it after you've told me."
should be "after all you've" I think

Also, shortly after this he tells D'flinga to leave, and he does in the dialogue, but he's still there on the screen during the conversation.

Later on, he says:
"As my...armies grew, so could I was given a chance to employ the other skills I was taught."
I'm not sure what he's trying to say there, but something is wrong. 
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #280 on: December 23, 2019, 01:19:21 am »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #281 on: January 12, 2020, 01:15:06 am »

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #282 on: January 17, 2020, 09:27:57 am »
Fixed everything. Keep 'em coming.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #283 on: February 10, 2020, 04:51:21 am »


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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #284 on: March 10, 2020, 01:35:19 am »
In the early quest with the mystery body in the medical ward the body was a man's, but one of the doctor's lines of dialogue referred to it as "her".