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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #150 on: May 10, 2015, 05:35:22 AM »
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #151 on: May 21, 2015, 05:15:38 AM »

Daniel Arda small typo, says the instead of they.





Bisson Says died in sleep. Died in his sleep or many other options available.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #152 on: July 19, 2015, 08:49:50 AM »
I picked up some Toxic Sludge just outside SGS, the description reads: "A canister of toxic sludge. You should definitively be carrying this around." Should be 'definitely'.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #153 on: July 20, 2015, 07:00:42 PM »
In dialogue with Ezra i can say:
"a creature similar to what i desribed"
should be "described".
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Use speedhack.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #154 on: July 22, 2015, 10:54:15 AM »
In the conversation with Ambassador Athanas where he offers you a spot in the Protectorate: "I have already contacted the consul and explained him the whole situation. He is expecting you arrival, charname.' Should be 'explained to him' and 'your'.

Mykola in Core City: "My was doing honest work, my business used to flourish." Aside from the typo the sentence is a bit off, perhaps "I was doing honest work and my business was flourishing."

Meeting Gorsky in Core City: "With Zone Rats on our side we have enough manpower to make a presence when the time comes." Should be "With the Zone Rats on our side we have enough manpower to make our presence felt/known when the time comes."

More Gorsky: "After you cleared (should be clear)the location, you must find a way to get the tunneler operational again. Look around the city and see if anyone got (should be has) the expertise, but be discreet about it."

All the dialogue with Gorsky and Sneaky here is a bit off, really.
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #155 on: July 23, 2015, 12:16:23 PM »
Bunch of Institute dialog stuff. Not sure if some of these were already posted.

One of the west wing entrance guards:
You like being here, is that what you're traying to say?
-> trying

Jerre Franz:
Medical examination adn treatment
-> and

Detritus:
1. You are<two spaces>very lucky to be alive.

Mediant Samuel:
Some defense bots were about to attack us, but I had managed to hack the console and prevent it.
-> Wrong tense, get of rid of the "had"

Eidein:
So, is everyone in the Insitute going to live as old as you?
-> Institute

there was hole in one of the wall, made by a tunneler
-> a hole, walls

But concrete evidence and knowledge that I had brought with me from Deep Caverns was to convince most.
-> was enough to


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Camp Hathor quest notes:
but he want's you to be the negotiator.
-> wants
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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #156 on: November 06, 2015, 09:39:23 PM »
As is:

Captain Blackwall: "The situation is as follows ... regular patrols around the perimiter..."

Needs to be "perimeter"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #157 on: December 14, 2015, 05:57:35 PM »
Gangster that is near the tunneler, when we try to persuade him, says:" (...) Yo, Mud, Trashman, Gravel and you Little Garbage, we is moving out!"

It should be "we are" I think :)

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #158 on: December 14, 2015, 06:52:16 PM »
 This seems intentional to me.
But the problem is, indeed, it zlots at Vlurxtrznbnaxl.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #159 on: December 18, 2015, 07:57:09 AM »
While investigating about the Acid Hunters

"now" instead of "know"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #160 on: December 18, 2015, 08:25:35 AM »
Asking Moe about "Barrel Soup"

"Yes, I heard me right." -> "Yes, you heard me right."

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #161 on: December 18, 2015, 03:44:48 PM »
v 1.0.0.0

Guys you wanna start a new thread for final game version or no?

Anyway here we go, new Intro section of the game, new spelling errors  :D

"Bots against fighting you" -> "Bots fighting against you"

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #162 on: December 18, 2015, 04:10:02 PM »
marked the spelling error, should be "right-click" instead.

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #163 on: December 18, 2015, 04:17:22 PM »
"might not be" - tutorial

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Re: Report spelling/grammar errors
« Reply #164 on: December 20, 2015, 07:31:48 AM »
"Armor" is an irregular plural in English. It doesn't take an "s", so the plural of armor is just armor.

In the tutorial...

"Hey Vencel, what weapon should I use against bots?"

1. And what about armors?
Change to "what about armor"

"Well armors are good for ya..."
Change to "well armor is good for ya..."


Also, this is weird phrasing...

"Don't expect to be very mobile in a metal armor ... a leather armor".

No need for the article there.
Change to "Don't expect to be very mobile in metal armor ... leather armor"